Cross Platform Critique

Chicago Tribune (Newspaper)

For Pearl Harbor dead, a final rest,” by Ted Gregory.il_ct

Content quality: The sources used for this timely article about the Pearl Harbor attack were substantial and appropriate. Sources interviewed included past servicemen, family members of the deceased, and professional scientists from the DNA laboratory. The reporting was very clear and comprehensive, ethical and well-balanced. Important questions were answered in the article and information was clearly conveyed. Readers were served well with an informative and timely story on Pearl Harbor.

Editing issues: I would rewrite the last sentence in the second paragraph because I was confused and had to reread the sentence a couple times. No other errors or grammatical issues were found and no need to change the structure or approach of the story. Continue reading